The Slam: Slammables
The Martyrs
by Erica, Missouri
There is a poison splitting the air between us
and scraps of bark sticking to our limbs,
to us sticky people.
We are tearing at the air around us --
trying to pierce the fabric of a lakeside world.
As we swipe we close our eyes
and the only solid things to tear are each other.
We want to beat off the bark
and to slice air into the poison,
but our nails are big and clumsy --
we miss and scratch our faces.
So we rip and dig out chunks
hating those that gave us sharp, sharp claws.
We tear to bide time
till the wind assumes our job
and rips herself apart by our bedsides
for the pine trees and goslings
and want of new aether.
We share an anguish and a fear.
We share a volcano under pressure.
We share that awful, ripping explosion,
and the wind-born landscapes
left in its wake.
This was very intense. It seems like the subject feels disgust itself. A lot of dark, coarse words for seemingly mild sentences (poison splits the air between us), which is good for what you intended.
Aug 24, 2010
Great language. I don't understand everything, but I love the words you used; they're beautiful and evocative. Keep it up!
Sep 12, 2010

Slammings