I like your poem, but it took me a few reads to realize that. I really enjoyed the images you used because they were unusual and colorful. (I think it's the first time I've seen the word "earthworm" in a poem, and it sounds good, not like I would've expected.) Putting the "No" by itself in its own stanza was also a good way of emphasizing it and marking the separation between the first stanza and the rest of the poem.

However, the last stanza disappointed me. I expected something stronger and more original after the rest of the poem, and it left me "hungry." Unless the effect was intended?

Anyway, great job and thanks for this poem!