Wow! I love your piece. I really like the metaphor you used throughout. The ending was my favorite, when you say, "And then / One day / It did." It's so matter-of-fact, and yet somehow unexpected. I hope to see more writing from you in the future.

I love your poem! The language, the flow, the topic, the ending: it's really enjoyable to read, even though the first two lines feel a bit out of place compared with the rest. I also really liked the last three lines, as has been said; they made me feel hopeful. It really feels great to read a poem (or story) and think, "Oh yes, exactly!" and that's what happened to me here. I feel this way when I dance, but I doubt I'd ever have thought to write a poem like this one. Great job, and thank you very much.