The Slam: Slammables
Lombard Street Woman
by Liz, Pennsylvania
Bougainvillea webbed the umber wall
in rich and brilliant threads. I’d never seen
these plum-brightened blooms, and mused
aloud, What is that flower? A passerby
stopped a moment, whispered
the gem. Actually, it could have been
a shout, for we travelers swarmed the walk,
all hollow tubes and pearls of air, clanging,
chiming as we swayed;
yet, surrounded by these roaring tidals
in my memory, her voice remains
cracking eggshells, opaline doors.
She might have been an unhinged root-
less florist, more shadow
than stem, most likely recalling
only the plumage that fanned
me: patch of denim, brick, a blur
of petals.
I love your words in this. Your words unite the bouganvillea and the woman, and leave a sort of shining impression on the reader. The words "gem," "roaring," "chiming," and "opaline" are all very clear, bright words and extremely beautiful. Am I right in thinking this is San Francisco you are writing about?
Jul 15, 2010
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Yes, you are correct. This took place on Lombard Street in San Fransisco. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. It means a lot, as I greatly admire your writing.
Jul 20, 2010

Slammings