Good opening line -- the idea to say "faked a smile" set me up to believe that you'd be lying to the girl. But there's not enough backstory to this. Why were you crying?

I really like how short and simple it is, but it still manages to make me feel sympathy for the main character. It also illustrates how so often people lie to make others feel good and hurt themselves in the process. I got the message on the first read through. Thanks for sharing it.

This is so sad and beautiful, especially the last sentence. It really rings true. You captured my own feelings exactly. I also like the way you surprised me at the end, because at first I thought he/she was lying. It's even better this way (although much sadder). Good job (and good luck, since this seems to be based on personal experience).

Oh, I really like this. No matter if it's another girl with the same love interest or a guy who loves this girl, you've captured the character really well. Personally, I interpret the speaker as a guy mainly because of the (very realistic) awkwardness of the sentence "your makeup matched your dress like they were made by the same company." It seems more like something a guy would say! Anyway, your poem is short, beautiful, and leaves just the right amount open to interpretation. Thank you!