The Slam: Slammables
river of pale
by wannagrowwings, Washington
Flowing river of darkness through canyons of air
Not-light filling up the space
Between
Blue veins translucent skin
Bulging fish eyes
Pale foreheads pressed to tepid feet
These hands will never feel air
What makes gill-lungs burn
It tastes so sweet
They break through the surface
Gulp air until their hearts stop.
This sweetness
So clear pure like tasting fire
Seeing through the murky depths
Muddied bodies
Slipping half-awake
Half-asleep
Like orchids that never see the sun.
They stay under the skin,
Looking for warmth,
Diving further.
Further into the
Gray-blue-black
Indistinguishable
Sweetness that turns bitter --
Infinite miles of pale
I really enjoyed this. It was slightly light-hearted and descriptive yet enigmatic. I think that it's about salamanders (or some creature like that, "gill-lungs" makes me think amphibian) who live in an underground river or spring, evolving pale skin from their lack of exposure to sunlight. I wonder what others think...
May 31, 2010

Slammings