The Slam: Slammables
in bed, after the storm
by Elizabeth, California
swallowing the uncomfortable intimacy
of your lips, firm but slightly moist,
against my neck --
like seeing someone else's pants around her ankles
under the door of the bathroom stall --
i think of a soft mist falling,
but then i wonder: why soft?
after all, if it's just a matter of quantity,
then you are my Katrina, my tsunami, my Triton.
subtlety is just the poet's form of lying,
you say, that funny little twitch in your --
for a moment, i am sure you are winking,
but no --
rather, i am the words on your unlined paper.
And the rest is still unwritten, haha. OK, sorry, it just kept reminding me of the pop song. I can totally see you crossing out the last line and replacing it with "unlined" instead of "unwritten." It was actually delightful imagery.
You talk about her "pants around her" ankles. Who is her? A little explanation: is it a boy or a girl talking?
May 19, 2010

Slammings