This may be biased, because I too have freckles and this makes me swell inside with that, "Yeah, I understand exactly what you mean" feeling... but I really love this piece! It is short and sweet and a pleasure to read. Every time I come to this site, which is quite often, I'll admit, I read your poem a couple of times. I would have commented sooner, except I didn't think I had much to say beside, "Hey, this is great and I can relate." Then I remembered how good even seemingly generic feedback can feel. I hope you submit more poems to The Slam so I can read some in the future.

I really like the rhyme, but your rhythm was off, 7-5-6-6?  It was very short, but I don't mind that.

I really loved your poem. It was simple and short but filled with grace. Lots of people detest their freckles, while I adore mine, and it really shows how a simple thing can be beautiful. Great job!