The Slam: Slammables
Proletarii vsekh stran, soyedinyats!
by L. M. Zhukov, Russia
no matter the breadlines are long
and the papers print pictures of scythes
we are the workers of the world
and we are to pay no tithes
workers of the world unite!
we say
workers of the world unite!
anna akhmatova screams for her son
and solzhenitsyn demands his voice
but stalin must be given his dues
and the masses must be given their choice
This was very intriguing. I think you wrote an interesting piece here. It's concise and powerful. You should keep it that way.
critiqued by Iyscyube
Jun 15, 2010
Jun 15, 2010
I love this. I don't even know exactly why I love it... just the way the words are put together makes it really beautiful to me. The rhyming could have made it cheesy, but instead it makes it even better.
critiqued by :P
Oct 6, 2010
Oct 6, 2010
Slammings