I love this because I'm not entirely sure what it is about. The words roll off each other in a kind of pattern; I can visualize the machine without knowing what it is, and it doesn't really matter what it is. It's different and beautifully written.

My favorite part is the end, with the line, "Your flawed design only makes you one of us." I love the comparison of people to machines, in the way that neither is anywhere near perfect. Our machines reflect the human condition, and are only as good as the creators. Really thought-provoking, and fun to read.

I also really liked this piece. One of the things I admired was that the machine you described does not need to be any specific machine. This poem could be accurately applied to almost any piece of machinery that people have created. This makes the poem quite universal. Well done!

Very good! I enjoyed reading this.  I like how it gave the message that we can't judge each other, and that our flaws make us human.  Looking forward to seeing more of your work!