The Slam: Slammables

le ciel t'aidera

by clair_de_lune92, Montreal, Canada

There are no cars out now.
The noise will go today
as well. She knows, Putain:
a day full without sky.

They are all running for
that piece of your heaven.

Slammings

I love the last stanza, "they are all running for that piece of your heaven."  Beautiful!

critiqued by A. A., Washington
Feb 23, 2010